Please feel free to write something better. I will be happy to publish it.
Where’s humblegunner when you need him ???
If you want to pimp your blog that’s fine by me, but how about simple things to enhance the story’s and your credibility, like comparing THIS family’s story to the number of Ethiopian families in Israel vs. the number of Ethiopian immigrants in Israel? It shouldn’t be that difficult.
It’s up to YOU to make your stories credible, sympathetic, and readable, not me. And maybe not be so touchy.