[butterdezillion]

Is there too much stuff in there? Sometimes putting too much in is worse than not enough.

[MileHi]

NO. It is a very complex issue and your work has at least made it palatable. It can't be done in a couple paragraphs.

Hawaii has their own reason for hiding the truth but it is complicated.

It would need to be a “white paper” with an executive summary and then hundreds of pages.

Actually, your work should become a book. Then you could get a whiz-bang computer that lets you get to your own blog...

LOL!