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To: csvset

Very poorly written story and headline. It appears that the criminal was shot by a security guard, so why was the DA considering charges against a cop, since there is no police officer mentioned in the story? 40 years ago, you would have found better writing and editing in a high school paper.


9 posted on 03/16/2017 4:53:40 AM PDT by PAR35
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To: PAR35
Yeah, there was another source ( couldn't post it ), that correcty ID'd him as a security guard, who also happens to be a retired sheriff deputy. Good job by the guard though, one less armed robber.

Deceased perp.

12 posted on 03/16/2017 5:21:02 AM PDT by csvset ( Illegitimi non carborundum)
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To: PAR35
40 years ago, you would have found better writing and editing in a high school paper.

Couldn't have said it better...DITTO! There was a time where accuracy was the be-all & end-all in journalism. Now it's about gathering eyeballs on-line and page linger time for the ads. As others have pointed out, other articles/sources have clearly stated the security guard is a retired sheriff's deputy. The would-be robber totally failed at victim selection and the rest of society is better off with him out of the gene pool.

17 posted on 03/16/2017 5:41:58 AM PDT by T-Bird45 (It feels like the seventies, and it shouldn't.)
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