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To: x_plus_one
Robert Mueller has a long and sordid history of illicitly targeting innocent people that is a stain upon the legacy of American jurisprudence.

If you parse the sentence, .....innocent people that is the stain.... makes no sense. It does not imply anyting. Why cant he get the sentence right the first time? Better to write ...targeting innocent people and this is a stain...

30-year professional bilingual copy editor here: The sentence is crystal-clear!

Regards,

26 posted on 04/25/2018 8:50:25 PM PDT by alexander_busek (Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.)
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To: alexander_busek
I would switch "which" for "that"--better grammar. 😉
33 posted on 04/25/2018 8:54:27 PM PDT by Mamzelle
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To: alexander_busek

Mueller ..... is a stain.

Yep, that about covers it...


46 posted on 04/25/2018 9:12:23 PM PDT by Paladin2
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To: alexander_busek
Robert Mueller has a long and sordid history of illicitly targeting innocent people that is a stain upon the legacy of American jurisprudence.

Try just:

Robert Mueller has a long and sordid history of illicitly targeting innocent people, a stain upon the legacy of American jurisprudence!

And follow with snark aimed at federal pigs such as Comey's counsel Robert Fitzgerald, whose life's achievement (putting away Scooter Libby) just got undone by POTUS, or Mueller's #1 goon Andrew Weissmann. Or Mueller himself.

84 posted on 04/26/2018 2:22:04 AM PDT by cynwoody
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To: alexander_busek

Yes, “stain” refers back to “history”, which are both singular. It is crystal clear unless you take the words out of context.


94 posted on 04/26/2018 3:56:19 AM PDT by Fresh Wind (Hillary: Go to jail. Go directly to jail. Do not pass GO. Do not collect 2 billion dollars.)
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