To: Gamecock
Commas are a wonderful thing. Fixed it for them.
"Authorities have arrested a man, wanted in Minnesota for the murder of a woman and her child, who traveled to South Carolina to kill his ex-girlfriend."
Still not a great sentence, but more readable.
7 posted on
09/14/2020 1:20:55 PM PDT by
grateful
To: grateful
Still not a great sentence, but more readable. AGREED but most of the news comes to us without the benefit of proof-readers or copy editors. WIS is a local TV/Radio in Columbia, SC, which is Richland County. Probably this is written by a USC Journalism grad/student. At least it is English ... ?
14 posted on
09/14/2020 1:31:19 PM PDT by
SES1066
To: grateful
22 posted on
09/14/2020 2:15:32 PM PDT by
wally_bert
(Transmission tone, Selm)
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