I read it earlier, Travis, and it was real good. I was looking for more when I got done . . .
About the PC angle, don't worry -- You can always change the ending to where the good guys get killed by the gov't. types and the old f*rt gets the hot chick . Hollywierd gobbles those up! ;^)
Now get back to work!
128 posted on 03/07/2002 8:24:29 PM PST by Crowcreek