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To: SubMareener

When I see writings like this, my eyes glaze over half way through the first paragraph. I don’t see how anybody could concentrate and absorb something so long. People writing need to learn the “4 S Formula” which stands for 1. Short, 2. Simple. 3. Sincere and 4. Smile.


4 posted on 01/28/2017 4:39:46 AM PST by Old Retired Army Guy (frequently.)
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To: Old Retired Army Guy
I'm with you. I spent years of my life learning to write and in college had professors who would rip things apart. While I'm sure the text here has great insights, it is nearly unreadable. Oh I'll plow through it, but after a cursory read, I couldn't find the meat that synced with the headline.

peace out....

irish guard

6 posted on 01/28/2017 4:44:44 AM PST by irish guard
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To: Old Retired Army Guy

+1.


9 posted on 01/28/2017 4:57:38 AM PST by mad_as_he$$ ("It's a war against humanity!" Donald J. Trump)
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To: Old Retired Army Guy

Yes, agreed. So, if the old pope was forced to resign, when can the new pope also be forced to resign?


13 posted on 01/28/2017 5:04:32 AM PST by Reno89519 (Drain the Swamp is not party specific. Lyn' Ted is still a liar, Good riddance to him.)
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To: Old Retired Army Guy

Amen.


24 posted on 01/28/2017 6:12:17 AM PST by Mr. Lucky
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To: Old Retired Army Guy

Try this. Much better formatting.

http://spir-food.blogspot.it/2017/01/pope-benedict-xvi-force-to-resign.html


27 posted on 01/28/2017 6:54:03 AM PST by Salvation ("With God all things are possible." Matthew 19:26)
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To: Old Retired Army Guy

Well said. It’s like trying to read spaghetti.


30 posted on 01/28/2017 7:32:56 AM PST by elhombrelibre (Cogito ergo sum a conservative pro-American.)
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