And he needs ol' Stan
To make him feel a man
With his pseudo macho schtick
Makes him think he's got a d!ck
Well, I say
F--- him (F--- him)
F--- him
(Repeat 462 times)
I'll let you know later where to send the Grammy.
You have become what you hate!! You are Eminem!
At least you proved that anyone can hurl insults and four letter words. What an accomplishment! Congrats.
Now for a critique on your rap song. It reminds me of an inner-city hip hop song. Your have caputured the essence of the african american rap experience with the shallow insults, and especially the repeat 462 times bit. So I guess that really makes you more like Snoop Dog or TuPac than Eminem. Because you see, Eminem is actually very smart, even though he is very offensive. You, apparently, are just offensive.
Here's is my attempt. It is about an imaginary intellectually lost boy from Pennsylvannia who can't control his temper.
What veered was your head, not the thread. Crashed into a wall, smashed and burned. Pitiful lump of quivering brain overstrained, stained with hate and self inflicted pain. When challenged, attack, change the subject, misread, misinterpret, misapply, miss the point, miss, miss again. Self proclaimed attitude, can't read black and white, just wants to fight, long distance, like M and M, you win with hate, now live with your shame. I'm done.
BTW, I forgive you for your direct personal attacks. Just please be a bit more obtuse in the future.