Posted on 09/27/2016 5:29:27 PM PDT by 1curiousmind
I would love to hear Donald Trump give this speech that I wrote:
Hillary claims everything is fine. Stay the course. We are doing just great. Oh really? Maybe that's true in her reality and the reality of her lobbyist cohorts and bureaucratic brokers.
Well, I've got news for her. For them.
When our once bustling inner cities are ruled by gangs and tens of thousands of our citizens are living in constant fear as their neighbors or children are being murdered and robbed each year. When the FBI reports that the national murder rate jumped 10.4 percent in 2015 alone. More than in 1/2 a century.
That's not great, Hillary. It's devastating.
When our veterans who fought for our freedoms are neglected and tossed to the side. Left to fend for themselves and many even die waiting for medical care.
That's not great Hillary. It's disgraceful.
When our government gets so oppressive and bloated that our overtaxed companies flow across our border heading south while illegals by the thousands are flooding across it heading north.
That's not great Hillary. It's unsustainable
When the race-baiting rhetoric of liberal democratic politicians results in the most poisoned and divided race relations in decades. When police men and women dawn their uniforms and hug their kids tightly each morning wondering if they might be targeted just because they have chosen to give themselves to the maintaining of civil law and order.
That is not great Hillary. It's unbelievable.
When the Secretary of State recklessly chooses to put our nations classified communications on a private server in her basement. And then engages in lies and cover up including the use of hammers to destroy evidence.
That's not great Hillary. It's criminal.
When our Libyan ambassador and his protectors are cornered and under attack and in desperate need of rescue and Hillary Clinton leaves them to die a horrible needless death at the hands of terrorists. And then, when that same individual has the callouses audacity to concoct a lie to cover her tracks.
That is not great Hillary. It's deplorable
Hillary, I love this country for all that it stands for. That's why Im running. You have stood by and watched as the ideals and dreams of many Americans have faded and died. And you are complicit in the failure of the current administration to deliver on its lofty promises of hope and change. In spite of the damage done the power of the American spirit is real and the potential impact of American exceptionalism remains.
Hillary, America is a great country. And it deserves great leaders. You have shown yourself to be unequivocally unfit for this office. Not just in your words. But in your deeds. The corruption cannot continue. The tide must turn. And it is turning indeed.
This movement has never been about me. It is about Americans. You know, the ones you affectionately call a "basket of deplorables." Well they're awakening. Standing strong. Locking arms and in unison saying "Enough!! Enough of the lies. Enough of the pandering. Enough of the corruption. The division. Enough of the moral decay and societal chaos. We are taking this country back."
You know what Hillary? That is great! And you know what else? We are going to defeat you.
And we are going to make America. Great. Again.
I would outline how Hillary was on the Board of Directors of Walmart for 6 years and how they financed Bills primary run in 1992.
Walmart flew Bill to the campaign stops on their planes.
Walmart, the number 1 company to shift our manufacturing to China.
China, who gave all the illegal campaign contributions to Bill through Charlie Trie and 30 others who escaped to China and were never prosecuted.
I would outline how Hillary did the above for personal gain and as a result shipped our manufacturing jobs to China.
If Trump outlines this scenario, Hillary is dead in the water... People remember the mass exodus of jobs in the 1990’s.
Excellent, but “dawn their uniform” should read “don their uniform”.
Of course, it sounds the same when spoken!
Every point is right on, though.
I knew that didn’t look right! Thanks. :)
I usually am not a “Spelling and Grammar Nazi”, but if you send it to Mr. Trump, I know you want it to be perfect.
Good speech, if he could fight off interruptions from Moderators and other Lester “Crowley” types.
Next debate though, I hope Donald can calm himself down some, and make full statements using complete sentences. Hillary always does this, and it makes a difference, especially when trying to educate the un-involved voter.
Donald also needs to have his own production team check his microphone, so that each and every inhalation is not broadcast as a loud whooshy wheeze as was the case last night. This too was a stumbling block, no doubt done to sabotage Donald, but not done to Hillary. What Donald lacked in finesse, he had in passion for the issues and for the truth. I think many undecided saw this too.
I want Donald to savage Hillary on many issues, but I understand his reasons for not bring Monica Lew. up. Since Chelsea was in the audience. I respect him even more for saying that, this time anyway. Still, Donald may need to power through that barrier if they continue using such visual cues as attempts to inhibit what he says.
Funny...he needs to work this in.
That needs to be a commercial, shown over and over, in all 50 states.
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