Watching the sunlight fade
against trees silhouetted by a dusky sky
with still a hint of rosy hue
Stars are hiding out of sight
waiting their chance to shine
which is their due
rim 6/28/05
Good evening Miss Feather . . . a change of pace for me, I'm trying my hand at other forms of poetry, I'm not not sure what you'd call this . . . but . . . it's definitely not haiku . . . ;-)
Excellent free verse.
It's great you are expanding your poetry writing skills.