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To: bentfeather; All

Watching the sunlight fade
against trees silhouetted by a dusky sky
with still a hint of rosy hue

Stars are hiding out of sight
waiting their chance to shine
which is their due

rim 6/28/05

Good evening Miss Feather . . . a change of pace for me, I'm trying my hand at other forms of poetry, I'm not not sure what you'd call this . . . but . . . it's definitely not haiku . . . ;-)


50 posted on 06/28/2005 8:47:27 PM PDT by HopeandGlory (Hey, Liberals . . . PC died on 9/11 . . . GET USED TO IT!!!)
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To: HopeandGlory

Excellent free verse.

It's great you are expanding your poetry writing skills.


51 posted on 06/29/2005 3:58:34 AM PDT by Soaring Feather
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