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there is a cavity in new york

Posted on 05/21/2006 6:29:03 PM PDT by lonster

there is a cavity in new york. my mind goes back to it like a tounge again and again. it stays in my life when i see old episodes of law and order and old movies like men in black when i see the incisors in all their glory standing like a mountain, breathing life into the setting. funny, it inspires different emotions now.

there is a cavity in new york. i never noticed the presence as much before. it's like an old house you passed every day on the way to school. always grateful for the shade without even knowing it. the smell of musty old boards and the color of faded paint always reaching out to fill the senses and never seen until gone one day. we then run home unbelieving to find the old pictures we took never knowing what was posing as well as those we love and remember.

there is a cavity in new york. the orators are mystified. we feed on remedies of denial and disclaimer. the mortar and saliva cloak the cries and blood. the fee never equals the reckoning. the ibuprophen is feckless.

there is a cavity in new york. it remains, no denture can fill it. no muck can patch it.

we still see it. we still feel it


TOPICS: Miscellaneous; Poetry
KEYWORDS: brokenshiftkey; groundzero; neverforget; nyc; wtc
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1 posted on 05/21/2006 6:29:05 PM PDT by lonster
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To: lonster

well, then, I guess that settles that. Ironic, too, what with all the dentists around...


2 posted on 05/21/2006 6:30:47 PM PDT by the invisib1e hand (the Twin Towers were dedicated to "world peace." Islam destroyed them. Meditate.)
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To: the invisib1e hand

I hear hillary is a pretty big cavity


3 posted on 05/21/2006 6:32:07 PM PDT by listenhillary (The original Contract with America - The U.S. Constitution)
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To: lonster

The state of NY is like one big cavity itself.


4 posted on 05/21/2006 6:32:07 PM PDT by rambo316 (Social engineering does not work and never will.)
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To: lonster

The first hit will cause some hallucinating...work through it, it'll pass, mmmkay!


5 posted on 05/21/2006 6:32:17 PM PDT by TheBigB (He's a Woozle and his name is Peanut.)
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To: the invisib1e hand

Not dentists. He needs a keyboard repairman.


6 posted on 05/21/2006 6:32:17 PM PDT by BenLurkin
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To: lonster

there's a big canyon in arizona too. :-)


7 posted on 05/21/2006 6:32:41 PM PDT by DouglasKC
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To: lonster

NY is full of holes.


8 posted on 05/21/2006 6:33:31 PM PDT by TADSLOS (Right Wing Infidel since 1954)
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To: lonster

9 posted on 05/21/2006 6:33:40 PM PDT by atomicpossum (Replies must follow approved guidelines or you will be kill-filed without appeal.)
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To: lonster
I still think Steve Martin's best movie was "Dead Men Don't Wear Plaid." Not that Steve Martin made a lot of good movies but that particular one was good. It's a shame he did not do more like it. I liked the part where he was just "adjusting" her breasts.
10 posted on 05/21/2006 6:34:57 PM PDT by SamAdams76 (I think Randy Travis must be paying his bills on home computer by now)
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To: lonster

The WTC?


11 posted on 05/21/2006 6:35:11 PM PDT by SuzyQue
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I toyed around with my reply but it's true. I have walked by that thing every day for the last year and half, and I'm sick and tired of it. I imagine that people who have been seeing it for the past 4 1/2 years must be all the more fed up with it.

It's a symbol of failure and gridlock, that hole. The dead aren't honored by that, imho. The tourists and the gawkers...someone called the PATH train in the hole the "Disney ride from Hell." Maybe we should leave Disney in the sun belt, and put the World Trade Center back to work.

12 posted on 05/21/2006 6:40:02 PM PDT by the invisib1e hand (the Twin Towers were dedicated to "world peace." Islam destroyed them. Meditate.)
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To: the invisib1e hand

If that's what he's talking about, I think his writing is pretty compelling. The grammar is atrocious, but maybe that's just a stylistic thing.

And - you're right, time to get on with it. A memorial, not a hole in the ground.


13 posted on 05/21/2006 6:46:06 PM PDT by SuzyQue
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To: the invisib1e hand

I was there a month ago. It's become a cheapened tourist attraction with scumbags hanging around hawking glossy photos of what once was. They will do the Boston Big Dig proud.


14 posted on 05/21/2006 6:47:35 PM PDT by Ron in Acreage (Liberal Democrats-Party before country, surrender before victory, generous with other peoples money.)
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To: listenhillary
I hear hillary is a pretty big cavity

I think she's more like 180 lbs of the stuff that can collect in a cavity that goes untreated.

15 posted on 05/21/2006 6:48:56 PM PDT by Gay State Conservative
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To: the invisib1e hand

The longer the "hole" stays there the more the terrorists can say they won.

I'd like that to NOT happen.


16 posted on 05/21/2006 6:51:06 PM PDT by listenhillary (The original Contract with America - The U.S. Constitution)
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To: SuzyQue
A memorial, not a hole in the ground.

Preferably a functioning, commercially viable development.

the hole screams indecision and identity crisis, impotence and insecurity.

17 posted on 05/21/2006 6:51:11 PM PDT by the invisib1e hand (the Twin Towers were dedicated to "world peace." Islam destroyed them. Meditate.)
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To: the invisib1e hand

Yes, the post-modern, "progressive" view of America.


18 posted on 05/21/2006 6:52:26 PM PDT by SuzyQue
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To: lonster; KentTrappedInLiberalSeattle; Tijeras_Slim

19 posted on 05/21/2006 7:22:04 PM PDT by martin_fierro (< |:)~)
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20 posted on 05/21/2006 7:27:15 PM PDT by martin_fierro (< |:)~)
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