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I need a "Screenplay Disease." LOL. Any FReeper doctors available?
self | 12-7-03 | geedee

Posted on 12/07/2003 7:01:44 AM PST by geedee

I need a disease where a dying female offspring requires a bone marrow transplant where a parent, preferably the father, is the ideal donor. Or some disease with a similar type procedure -- the key is the father MUST be able to donate what's required and remain conscious.

In my nearly-finished screenplay the father is the boogie man and the mother is the heroine and the father blackmails the mother to do as he wishes AND in return he promises to be the donor. I've found a gazillion "potentially fatal" diseases with "relatively" simple procedures required but most aren't geared towards the parents being the donors. And I haven't found one where the father is the ideal donor for a female child. So I decided if I could fine one where the parents were ideal donors then I could eliminate the mother for some valid reason and that would leave the father.

If it's believable, experimental diseases are okay. LOL.

Right now, I have the daughter dying of leukemia and the father supplying the bone marrow -- with the proviso that it has to be "experimentally" modified by genetic engineering. Kinda lame, huh?

Well . . . that's why I'm asking for your help! So if anyone can help this writer-wannabe -- it is a helluva story by the way -- I sure need it. This is all I need before I can call the screenplay complete and join the gazillion other dreamers pitching their naive ideas to a shark-dominated Hollyweird.

My heroine has DEFINITE conservative streak in her . . . so it's damn sure unique! LOL.


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Come one, come all. I'll credit anyone who can help.

Thanks, geedee.

1 posted on 12/07/2003 7:01:45 AM PST by geedee
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To: geedee
Just make one up. They've been doing that on the soaps for decades. See "suspension of disbelief". ;D
2 posted on 12/07/2003 7:05:29 AM PST by hellinahandcart
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To: WVNan
Do you know where I might get some help on this? I know you're not a doctor but you've been around FR longer than moi.
3 posted on 12/07/2003 7:06:08 AM PST by geedee (I am opposed to millionaires, but it would be dangerous to offer me the position.)
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To: geedee
...a disease where a dying female offspring requires a bone marrow transplant where a parent, preferably the father, is the ideal donor. ...the key is the father MUST be able to donate what's required and remain conscious. ...the father is the boogie man and the mother is the heroine and the father blackmails the mother to do as he wishes AND in return he promises to be the donor.

Except for the "bone marrow" specific, a feminist might suggest that the disease you're looking for is called "family."

Dan

4 posted on 12/07/2003 7:06:46 AM PST by BibChr ("...behold, they have rejected the word of the LORD, so what wisdom is in them?" [Jer. 8:9])
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To: hellinahandcart; geedee
The people of Soapland are subject to a set of special ills. Temporary blindness, preceded by dizzy spells and headaches, is a common affliction of Soapland people. The condition usually clears up in six or eight weeks, but once in a while it develops into a brain tumor and the patient dies. One script writer, apparently forgetting that General Mills was the sponsor of his serial, had one of his women characters go temporarily blind because of an allergy to chocolate cake. There was hell to pay, and the writer had to make the doctor in charge of the patient hastily change his diagnosis. Amnesia strikes almost as often in Soapland as the common cold in our world. There have been as many as eight or nine amnesia cases on the air at one time.

-- James Thurber, Soapland.


5 posted on 12/07/2003 7:07:54 AM PST by dighton
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To: hellinahandcart
Just make one up. They've been doing that on the soaps for decades. See "suspension of disbelief". ;D

LOL. Good point.

But my screenplay has several time-sensitive topics that I meticulously spent months and months researching so I'd like to leave your option as the one of last resort.

By the way, since it's been awhile since I started a thread, did I do this one right? Did I put it in the "Vanity" area properly?

6 posted on 12/07/2003 7:12:55 AM PST by geedee (I am opposed to millionaires, but it would be dangerous to offer me the position.)
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To: geedee
Don't have a clue and not sure if this is helpful, but when I searched Google on the phrase "father donated his bone marrow," I got one hit that told the story of a 4-yr-old girl who had "severe combined immune deficiency (SCID), which many people know as the 'boy in the bubble' disease."
7 posted on 12/07/2003 7:16:25 AM PST by LibWhacker
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To: LibWhacker
Hey thanks! Dumb 'ol me didn't even think of searching like that.
8 posted on 12/07/2003 7:17:31 AM PST by geedee (I am opposed to millionaires, but it would be dangerous to offer me the position.)
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To: geedee
Well, how about Concus laboncus. I used this disease on excuses for college professors for four years and was excused ever time..... Even on major exams.

As a kicker, add a little drug reaction as with penicillin or such.
9 posted on 12/07/2003 7:19:53 AM PST by bert (Don't Panic!)
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To: geedee
Liberalism comes to mind as an apropos disease...
10 posted on 12/07/2003 7:21:10 AM PST by Gman
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To: geedee
Well . . . that's why I'm asking for your help! So if anyone can help this writer-wannabe -- it is a helluva story by the way -- I sure need it. This is all I need before I can call the screenplay complete and join the gazillion other dreamers pitching their naive ideas to a shark-dominated Hollyweird.

You have FReepmail.

11 posted on 12/07/2003 7:22:06 AM PST by veronica (I just realised I have a perfect part for you in Terminator 2....)
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To: LibWhacker
Oh man! That Brenan is a gorgeous little girl, isn't she? And it was a great Sunday-morning read since her story ended successful.

Thanks for the help . . . but sadly my eleven-year-old girl, to match my story requirements, has to be actively-involved with her mother in warding off the boogie man -- her father. A little tease, he's in prison and escapes when he's taken for the transplant. So the mother and child are on the run.

Other than that requirement, your idea would've been perfect.

12 posted on 12/07/2003 7:23:05 AM PST by geedee (I am opposed to millionaires, but it would be dangerous to offer me the position.)
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To: geedee
Can you make it a Grandmother as the reluctant donor instead? I just have grown to dislike, "Daddy as the Villain" type of stories. They are so cliched. But here is one group of diseases you might consider.

Bone marrow transplantation is the only known treatment for a variety of genetic diseases sometimes called "inborn errors of metabolism" or "storage diseases." Each of these diseases is due to the deficiency of a specific substance in the body called an enzyme, which results in the accumulation of toxic chemicals inside the cells. Depending upon the enzyme abnormality and the chemicals that accumulate, specific patterns of tissue damage and organ failure occur. These include central nervous system deterioration, growth failure, bone abnormalities and joint disability, enlargement of the liver and spleen in the abdomen, heart disease, airway obstruction, lung disease, corneal clouding and hearing loss. The eventual organ damage and outcome of the different diseases is quite variable, although the ones in which BMT has been evaluated are those that have a naturally progressive downward course ultimately ending in death in childhood.

I am thinking the father as the carrier and he got the gene from his father but his mother would not have the gene.

(I am not a doctor and I do not play one on TV)

13 posted on 12/07/2003 7:25:41 AM PST by Harmless Teddy Bear (My ex is saying that I have become hostile. I wonder why Speed-bump would think that?)
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To: geedee
I know you're not a doctor but you've been around FR longer than moi...........

Maybe you shoulda stayed at a Holiday Inn Express or something!

14 posted on 12/07/2003 7:25:47 AM PST by MadelineZapeezda
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To: geedee
Gad, a fellow screenwritier here. You know, of course, we'll never get our work bought, much less filmed unless we hid our politics.

BTW, been to Zoetrope yet? One of my scripts was rated among the three best one month and not a single offer came my way. Guess you cannot have God and family values a vital part of a script nowadays, eh?

15 posted on 12/07/2003 7:32:41 AM PST by sonofatpatcher2 (Love & a .45-- What more could you want, campers? };^)
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To: geedee
I figured the bubble thing might require a major re-write, lol.
16 posted on 12/07/2003 7:38:47 AM PST by LibWhacker
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To: geedee
Does it have to be bone marrow? Wouldn't a kidney transplant work just as well?
17 posted on 12/07/2003 7:39:28 AM PST by expatpat
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To: geedee
YAWS.
18 posted on 12/07/2003 7:40:44 AM PST by Tijeras_Slim (SSDD - Same S#it Different Democrat)
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To: Gman
LOL. Sadly, "liberalism" is fatal 100% of the time.
19 posted on 12/07/2003 7:44:38 AM PST by geedee (I am opposed to millionaires, but it would be dangerous to offer me the position.)
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To: expatpat
organ transplant compatibility is not family -specific.
20 posted on 12/07/2003 7:46:23 AM PST by blau993 (Labs for love; .357 for Security.)
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