[TheOldLady]

Pretty good!

"Needles" for needless
"applause" for applauded
"sellout" for sell out
missing dashes in an adjective group
"to telling" for of telling or to tell

There's not much wrong with it, and nothing that changes or obscures what you're saying. My job here is done, LOL!

P.S. I don't mind proofing your stuff.

[OneVike]

Thanks, I was pressed and needed it quick. I started it this morning about 4:30 and barely got it posted when needed other wise I would have sent it first.

I appreciate you very much and will still use you when I can.

Thanks again.