Whatever. I’m not a journalist. Do me a favor and witness things yourself. Then you can stun us with your journalistic acumen, and in the mean time I’ll put on blinders until I can go to journalism school.
What does being a journalist have to do with simply stating “Hey, the IDF rousted their own people”?
Absolutely nothing.
“At 3AM Some Jewish people were thrown out of their home by Jewish IDF Soldiers.
“Then some people got together and built them a new concrete foundation for a home and let children help spread the concrete.
“Then we watched a concert.”
Is that about right?
Your plot development needs improvement, the identification of the main characters is confusing and no resolution is given. Are the people still in friends homes? Did they build a new home on the concrete foundation? Why did the soldiers appear at 3AM? To apease Obama? How did you find a computer and know to go to FreeRepublic.com to post this info? AND are you a FR donor?
All these things are important to know.
Just trying to help. Your story is interesting, but judging from the comments there was a lot of confusion about what took place. Just trying to help, FRiend.