The first line of your post reads, "Literally as I write this piece today police are on a manhunt in Tulsa, Oklahoma for a white man who is accused of killing five black men"... When you state that wrote you wrote your piece "today", (which I assume was yesterday the 8th of April) police had already arrested two white men, and three black people, not five, had died. If per chance you wrote your piece earlier in the week, that should have been mentioned rather than "today".
If you want to be taken seriously, and I think you do, you must pay attention to the details of the facts. If in the first sentence of your piece a reader immediately questions the writers knowledge of the facts, how is he supposed to take seriously the rest of what is written... all I'm sayin'...
Sincerely, Mr Jamal...
Jamal,
I did not write the article.
I merely posted it.
Try to get two of those tiny brain cell of yours connected to one another.
Regards.