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To: marktwain
The homeowner drew his own hand gun, pointed it at the suspect and fired.

Both got into a car and fled leaving their guns behind.

Now, why would you want to get into a car with a robber that you just shot? And why would you leave your gun behind?

Can no one write a coherent story anymore?

2 posted on 06/15/2012 7:01:16 PM PDT by rmh47 (Go Kats! - Got eight? [NRA Life Member])
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To: rmh47

Because it’s too difficult to write “Both suspects got into...” when you can simply write “Both got into....”? I agree with you that this is simply poor writing.

Brevity at the expense of clarity—a very common behavior among our professional “writers” now.


3 posted on 06/15/2012 7:07:10 PM PDT by House Atreides
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