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The Myth of Obama’s Rhetorical Brilliance
Commentary Magazine ^ | July 20, 2012 | Alana Goodman

Posted on 07/21/2012 3:29:12 PM PDT by Kaslin

Checking for context before slamming someone for a single line in a speech is always a noble endeavor. But there’s a point when the “benefit of the doubt” becomes ridiculous. A prime example is the liberal argument that President Obama’s “you didn’t build that” comment wasn’t directed at businesses:

When he made the comment in Roanoke, Va. Friday, Obama was arguing that businesses needed infrastructure investment to succeed.

“If you were successful, somebody along the line gave you some help,” Obama said. “There was a great teacher somewhere in your life. Somebody helped to create this unbelievable American system that we have that allowed you to thrive. Somebody invested in roads and bridges. If you’ve got a business, you didn’t build that. Somebody else made that happen.”

The antecedent to “that” is not the business, but “roads and bridges,” as well as the “American system” as a whole.

To believe that Obama was talking about businesses, you only have to watch his speech in context and take it at its literal meaning. To believe Obama was talking about something else, you have to divine certain messages from his ambiguous body language, assume he mixed up his demonstrative pronouns, and concede that the context was structured oddly. Even then, it isn’t clear what exactly he’s referring to.

How could this be, considering he’s supposed to be one of the world’s most celebrated orators? The answer is, no teleprompter:

Judging from video and photos of the event, Obama wasn’t using his teleprompter. According to the video footage posted below, Obama pulled a folded sheet of paper out of his front shirt pocket at the beginning of his speech, and slowly unfolded it. Throughout the speech, Obama glances down at his sheet of paper, rather than the usual mechanical side-to-side head turns from screen to screen.

Wide-angle photos of the event show no sign of the familiar twin-screens that typically follow Obama everywhere. Instead, a white sheet of paper is seen at the podium.

No wonder the speech was such a train wreck, and I’m not just talking about the most controversial line. Here’s a key excerpt:

If you were successful somebody along the line gave you some help. There was a great teacher somewhere in your life. Somebody helped to create this unbelievable American system that we have that allowed you to thrive. Somebody invested in roads and bridges. If you own a business — that, you didn’t build that. Somebody else made that happen. The Iternet didn’t get invented on its own. Government research created the Internet so that all the companies could make money off the Internet. The point is, is that when we succeed, we succeed because of our individual initiative, but also because we do things together. There are some things, just like fighting fires, we don’t do on our own. I mean, imagine if everybody had their own fire service. That would be a hard way to organize fighting fires.

Stilted, flat, unimaginative and full of banal observations. “Imagine if everybody had their own fire service,” he said at one point. “That would be a hard way to organize fighting fires.” Really? It actually sounds like firefighting would be pretty easy if America had 300 million fire services. Not that this is physically possible, or that anybody has ever proposed such a thing. “Government research created the Internet so that all the companies could make money off the Internet,” he added. The idea that the government created the Internet to help companies make money is so obviously inaccurate that it’s not even worth discussing. And what does any of this have to do with raising federal income taxes?

For the past four years, liberals have tried to sell us on the idea that Obama is one of the greatest speakers of all time. Now they’re complaining that conservatives are taking his words literally and not cutting him enough slack. Which one is it?


TOPICS: Culture/Society; Editorial; Politics/Elections
KEYWORDS: 57states; kenyanbornmuzzie; mediawingofthednc; mymuslimfaith; partisanmediashills; roanoke; webuiltthat; youdidntbuildthat
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1 posted on 07/21/2012 3:29:20 PM PDT by Kaslin
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2 posted on 07/21/2012 3:31:32 PM PDT by rlmorel ("The safest road to Hell is the gradual one." Screwtape (C.S. Lewis))
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To: Kaslin

Fire service? Who uses that phrasing? A foreigner, that’s who. Fire department.


3 posted on 07/21/2012 3:36:28 PM PDT by NonValueAdded (Steyn: "One can argue about whose fault it is, but not ... whose responsibility it is: it's his")
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To: Kaslin
Ask a Liberal to recite some brilliant lines they remember from past Obama speeches. I bet they can't. He's not JFK. Although he has a reputation as a brilliant speaker, no one actually remembers anything brilliant that he has said.

Now, ask a Conservative to recite some stupid things that they remember Obama saying, and you'd better pull up a chair -- there is a lot to talk about.

4 posted on 07/21/2012 3:37:12 PM PDT by ClearCase_guy (Roger Taney? Not a bad Chief Justice. John Roberts? A really awful Chief Justice.)
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5 posted on 07/21/2012 3:42:21 PM PDT by Iron Munro ("Jiggle the Handle for Barry!")
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To: NonValueAdded
Fire service? Who uses that phrasing? A foreigner, that’s who. Fire department.

While I understand your point - it's wrong, lots of people use that term who are not foreigners. I live in an area that has only volunteer fire departments and we do make references to fire service.

6 posted on 07/21/2012 3:42:48 PM PDT by Gabz (Democrats for Voldemort.)
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To: Kaslin
I have never thought that Obama is any kind of orator, let alone a brilliant one. Understand, I loathe "The Reverend" Je$$ie Jack$on and everything he stands for, but the man can make a speech.

With Obama, it's "blah blah blah BLAH, BLAH BLAH blah. blah blah BLAH, BLAH blah." His cadences make me cringe.

7 posted on 07/21/2012 3:52:13 PM PDT by sima_yi ( Reporting live from the far North)
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The key to the passage is the verb: There was a great teacher somewhere in your life. Somebody helped to create this unbelievable American system that we have that allowed you to thrive.

This is how he thinks. He believes in collective ownership. He believes that it PERMITS success, instead of aiding it.

8 posted on 07/21/2012 3:54:15 PM PDT by Carry_Okie (The Slave Party Switcheroo: Economic crisis! Zero's eligibility Trumped!! Hillary 2012!!!)
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To: NonValueAdded

Maybe it translates from Indonesian to fire service?


9 posted on 07/21/2012 4:00:10 PM PDT by Kaslin (Acronym for OBAMA: One Big Ass Mistake America)
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Can any man be rhetorically brilliant or eloquent if he makes you skin crawl when he talks?


10 posted on 07/21/2012 4:00:57 PM PDT by stevem
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Obama is not only an idiot, he is a slow learner as well.

Video: Obama Salutes The Navy Corpse-Men (Oct 26, 2009)

Video: Obama Salutes The Navy Corpse-Men (Feb 4, 2010)


11 posted on 07/21/2012 4:03:40 PM PDT by Iron Munro ("Jiggle the Handle for Barry!")
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12 posted on 07/21/2012 4:38:05 PM PDT by martin_fierro (< |:)~)
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To: Carry_Okie

Obama was arguing that businesses needed infrastructure investment to succeed.”

He was also clearly implying the The People collectively have a stake in all businesses that they “allowed” to thrive.


13 posted on 07/21/2012 4:40:08 PM PDT by Dr. Pritchett
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He was also clearly implying the The People collectively have a stake in all businesses that they “allowed” to thrive.

As to rescinding that allowance without committing suicide, I'm afraid we will have allowed them to try.

14 posted on 07/21/2012 4:47:32 PM PDT by Carry_Okie (The Slave Party Switcheroo: Economic crisis! Zero's eligibility Trumped!! Hillary 2012!!!)
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I wonder if BO knows any other terms for when the people (or the gov’t) own the means of production. Hmmm. I bet a smart guy like that could come up with a couple.


15 posted on 07/21/2012 4:58:16 PM PDT by Dr. Pritchett
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And what does any of this have to do with raising federal income taxes?

Liberals have often made speeches referring to wealthy people as "winners of life's lottery." The less credit given to individuals who succeed by dint of hard work, creativity, intelligence, and risk-taking, the easier it is to justify confiscating their wealth, since "they didn't really earn it."

Many of us have been around a friend who suddenly got a good deal of money that he actually didn't earn. Perhaps that 50-1 longshot came in, or maybe he had a long-lost relative who left him a bunch of dough. Often, the guy will say, "Hey--I caught a real break today--dinner's on me." If he doesn't offer, his friends might tease and cajole him into sharing a small portion of his serendipity.

That's a different story from a guy who breaks his butt doing heavy labor and gets his paycheck. His buddies are a lot less likely to expect him to share what he earned, as opposed to money he came by without the sweat of his brow.

Hence--the Obama speech. You didn't earn it, the government had a big part in your success--therefore, we can raise your taxes and take a lot of it away.

16 posted on 07/21/2012 5:04:42 PM PDT by TruthShallSetYouFree (I didn't write this by myself. Obama helped me. Everyone helped me.)
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To: NonValueAdded

http://fireserviceinc.com/ ~ since 1991 there’s a company in St. John Indiana been using the name. In 2009 CNNMoney ranked it the 48th best place among the top 100 to live in America.


17 posted on 07/21/2012 5:09:02 PM PDT by muawiyah
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To: stevem
“Can any man be rhetorically brilliant or eloquent if he makes you skin crawl when he talks?”

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Its worse than that, Just seeing the Kenyon Punk and/or his sister Lousy and Bro Reid makes MY skin crawl.

18 posted on 07/21/2012 5:10:40 PM PDT by mongo141 (Revolution ver. 2.0, just a matter of when, not a matter of if!)
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To: Dr. Pritchett
I wonder if BO knows any other terms for when the people (or the gov’t) own the means of production.

How about "collective" or "commune?" Do you think he knows those words? We already know he knows "redistribution."

19 posted on 07/21/2012 5:11:28 PM PDT by Rocky (Obama is pure evil)
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To: Kaslin

I always hated listening to George Bush speak. It was painful listening to him suffer through his speeches. With Obama, it’s painful listening to the pride and arrogance, not to mention his idiotic way of stressing the last of each sentence. It’s like the twinkie fag thinks inflection equals importance. Then again, he could be doing it to alert the teleprompter that it is time to move to the next sentence. Maybe he should do like Kerry, or maybe it was Gore, who had an earpiece telling him what to say.


20 posted on 07/21/2012 5:13:40 PM PDT by pallis
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