Posted on 10/30/2012 4:37:42 PM PDT by Hojczyk
Women United bring us a powerful new ad on Benghazi that is short and to the point:
http://www.therightscoop.com/powerful-new-benghazi-ad-when-they-called/
The woman narrating the video sounds kind of wimpy. No offense intended, it’s just the impression it made on me.
BTTT
I think she sounded A-OK.
GOOD idea to have a woman and note it’s paid for by WOMEN UNITED.
I don’t like it. It’s not strong enough. Too many people don’t understand the backstory. They don’t even know that Obama abandoned two SEALs who were calling for help and had already saved 30 of their own countrymen. Very weak that the ad lets Obama, Hillary, and Carney lie three times without stating explicitly that it’s a lie.
Wow. Maybe someone’s reading the pith here, finally!
A gentle voice to me. Not wimpy...
The target audience probably more likely to listen to this tone.
I believe it missed the mark as well. It could have been much more effective but if you haven’t been following the story it doesn’t tell you much.
I believe it missed the mark as well. It could have been much more effective but if you haven’t been following the story it doesn’t tell you much.
Where is the ad running? In what markets?
It's a ‘reminder’ ad. Anyone who has to have the whole scenario spelled out to them at this point isn't paying attention anyway...
I uses to make my living in advertising.
I think this is well done.
Why’nt you write us out all the stuff YOU think it should have covered - and get it into 30 seconds?
I could. I’ve done some marketing and ad writing myself.
You can get more information in with tighter editing, too.
” It’s a reminder ad. Anyone who has to have the whole scenario spelled out to them at this point isn’t paying attention anyway...”
Yep. Any little bit helps.
Prescisely.
Everything helps.
It’s startling to read the gripes and “I could have done it better’s”.
Then DO IT!
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