Who are you and why should anyone care?
JAG
I am a reader who had a question. It is up to the writer to make himself understood. Maybe a preface to explain what we were reading would have been helpful.
I've heard of John Q. Public, Joe Sixpack, John Bull, Percival Milquetoast and the like but I had never heard of Bobby Foole.
A search found the name "Bobby Foole" in newspaper archives from 1861 and 1925, but the archiver wanted a fee to view the text.
In any case, the writing fell flat for me, but I see now it wasn't written for me anyway. Cheers!