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To: nathanbedford
"The gross federal Leviathan on is a symptom of an ideology that is all wrong. So long as that ideology could be described as "liberalism" the miraculous tool powers of our free enterprise system and our constitutional federal system could cope with the creeping intrusions of government."

Proofread! These sentences make no sense as written..."Leviathan on is?"..."the miraculous tool powers?" The writing is so poor one cannot discern the intent.

12 posted on 10/19/2014 2:55:32 AM PDT by databoss
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To: databoss

“Proofread! These sentences make no sense as written...”Leviathan on is?”...”the miraculous tool powers?” The writing is so poor one cannot discern the intent.”

So what grade do you give it teach? A C+
I bet most news articles drive you nuts.
Feel free to grade my posts at will, I could
use the help.


16 posted on 10/19/2014 3:48:06 AM PDT by Slambat
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To: databoss

I had no problem with it. Yes the ‘on’ was not edited out. BFD. If you had any contribution 1/100 that of Nathan Bedford here at FR then maybe you could have standing. Go suck on another lemon.


30 posted on 10/19/2014 5:41:04 AM PDT by corkoman
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