CAN'T ANYONE WRITE SENTENCES BETTER THAN THIS MONSTROSITY ANYMORE??
< /compulsive grammarian>
Um...
Fekri, dismissed as exaggeration and fantasy by most other Egyptologists, was determined to prove the writings were true and accurate.
There. Better?
>>> Fekri, dismissed as exaggeration and fantasy by most other Egyptologists, was determined to prove the writings were true and accurate. There. Better?
No. Too many miles between subject and verb. Unless there's a mistake, why don't you focus on content?