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Jewish Haiku
The TBH Short Schrift | November, 2001 | David Hanig

Posted on 11/16/2001 1:13:50 PM PST by poindexter

A lovely nose ring--
excuse me while I put
my head in the oven.

After the warm rain
the sweet smell of camellias.
Did you wipe your feet?

Her lips near my ear,
Aunt Sadie whispers the name
of her friend's disease.

Looking for pink buds
to prune, the old mohel wanders
among his flowers.

Today I am a man.
Tomorrow I will return
to the seventh grade.

The sparkling blue sea
reminds me to wait an
hour after my sandwich.

Tea ceremony--
fragrant steam perfumes the air.
Try the cheese danish.
Lacking fins or tail
the gefilte fish swims
with great difficulty.

Lovely butterfly--
not long ago your name was
Caterpillarstein.

A cat steals into
the night just like my former
partner, that gonif.

Hey! Get back indoors.
Whatever you were doing
could put an eye out.

In the ice sculpture
reflected bar mitzvah guests
nosh on chopped liver.

How soft the petals
of the floral arrangement
I have just stolen.

My nature journal--
today, I saw some trees and birds.
I should know the names?

Like a bonsai tree,
your terrible posture at
my dinner table.

Beyond Valium
the peace of knowing one's child
is an internist.

Coroner's report--
"The deceased, wearing no hat,
caught his death of cold."

The sparrow brings home
too many worms for her young.
"Force yourself," she chirps.

The shivah visit:
so sorry about your loss.
Now back to my problems.

Mom, please! There is no
need to put that dinner roll
in your pocketbook.

Seven-foot Jews in
the NBA slam-dunking!
My alarm clock rings.

Sorry I'm not home
to take your call. At the tone
please state your bad news.

Is one Nobel Prize
so much to ask from a child
after all I've done?

Hava nagila,
hava nagila, hava--
enough already.

Today, mild shvitzing.
Tomorrow, so hot you'll plotz.
Five-day forecast-feh.

Yenta. Schmeer. Gevalt.
Shlemiel. Shlimazl. Tochis.
Oy! To be fluent!

Quietly murmured
at Saturday services,
Yanks 5, Red Sox 3.

Cherry blossoms bloom.
Sure, it's beatiful, but
is it good for the Jews?

Hard to tell under
the lights--white Yarmulke
or male-pattern baldness.


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1 posted on 11/16/2001 1:13:50 PM PST by poindexter
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To: poindexter
Feh!
2 posted on 11/16/2001 1:13:51 PM PST by evolved_rage
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To: poindexter
I don't understand
what the deal is with Haikus
I think that they suck
3 posted on 11/16/2001 1:13:51 PM PST by Texaggie79
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To: poindexter; austinTparty; Orual; MinuteGal
My nature journal--
today, I saw some trees and birds.
I should know the names?

Wordsworth she isn't.

4 posted on 11/16/2001 1:13:53 PM PST by dighton
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To: dighton
Visit to farm of my youth

Hay fever strikes again

Chicken soup fizzles.

Leni

5 posted on 11/16/2001 1:13:59 PM PST by MinuteGal
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To: poindexter
LOL from an MOT.
6 posted on 11/16/2001 1:14:03 PM PST by Magician
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To: dighton
oy vey.
7 posted on 11/16/2001 1:14:19 PM PST by austinTparty
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To: poindexter; arimus; one_particular_harbour; RonKY; PeterBarringer; louisvillepatriot...
Okay. Just for grins, howz about some Hillbilly Haiku??

First some larnin' bout this here haiku (hi-coo) stuff. Ya gotta take 17 of these danged syllables an divid 'em inta 3 groups of 5, 7 and 5 syllables. Looky here:

Haiku is easy                        5
Counting syllables is hard      7
Must use both my hands       5

Git it?  Well then, check 'em out:

THE LIFE

Big sack a pork rinds
Cooler full of cold longnecks
Can't get no better

BEAUTY

Naked in repose
Silvery silhouette girls
Adorn my mudflaps

REMORSE

A painful sadness
Can't fit big screen TV through
Double-wide's front door

TYPICAL

Gun rack in window
Deep mud is no worry cause
I got new tires

PIT STOP

Beer and ammo sign
Cheap smokes white gas and fresh bait
Life is good today

OPTIONS

Unemployment's out
Hey, maybe I can get on
Disability

BLAZE

Distant siren screams
Dumb-ass Verne's been playing with
Gasoline again

SADNESS

My Ford pickup truck
Up on blocks so sad to see
Sold the tires for beer

NEW LOVE

Soft hair, round brown eyes
Pleading for me to take her
I think I love ewe

A NEW MOON

Flashlights pierce darkness
No nightcrawlers to be found
Guess we'll gig some frogs

EXUBERANCE

Joyous, playful, bright
Trailer park girl rolls in puddle
Of old motor oil

ALONE

Seeking solitude
Carl's ex-wife Tammy files for
Restraining order

DESIRE

Damn, in that tube-top
You make me almost forget
You are my cousin

OFFERINGS

Tonight we hunger
Grandma sent grocery money
To Jimmy Swaggert

DRAMA

Set the VCR
Dukes of Hazzard Marathon
On TV tonight

DEPRIVED

In WalMart toy aisle
Wailing boy wants 'rassling doll
Mama whups his ass

MORE TYPICAL

Sittin on the dock
My eyes cross and I'm dizzy
I'm too drunk to fish

DINNER

Spatula in hand 
I scrape the flatened possum 
From the black highway

POLITICS

Vote like my Daddy
And his Daddy before him
Get the check later 

NO SIGNAL

White noise, buzzing static
Call Earl; satellite dish
needs new descrambler

HOME IMPROVEMENT

A new trailer skirt
But my envious neighbors
Pretend not to see

IMPOUNDED

Sixty-five dollars
And cyclone fence keeps me from
My El Camino

DISAPPOINTMENT

Bass boat outta gas
Got finned by a damned catfish
At least I've got beer

ANTICIPATION

Couch out on the lawn 
Cousin Sue waiting on it 
Hope she brought her teeth

POACHING

The spot finds a deer
The rifle cracks out sharply
The stewpot is full

SEX

Distant dog barking
Surprised neighbor's angry face
His goat is sexy

GATHERING

In early morning mist
Mama searches Circle K for
Moon Pies and Red Man

MEMORIAL

Think of my brother
Been dead since May; his final
words, Hey y'all watch this

MISFORTUNE

Truck in ditch again
Maybe Earl gots a wrecker
Long walk to beer store 

PASSING

Number 3 is gone
Daytona's wall took him home
Let's root for the son

PRIDE

Grinning, he displays
The nine hundred beer cans
Filling pickup bed

THA END

Cleaning the outhouse
My favorite thing to do
In the afternoon

8 posted on 11/16/2001 1:14:20 PM PST by upchuck
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To: poindexter
Fish Hawk sees Haikus
Doesn't care if it's Jewish
Has to add two cents.
9 posted on 11/16/2001 1:14:41 PM PST by fish hawk
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To: dighton
Dante it ain't.
11 posted on 11/16/2001 1:15:12 PM PST by Orual
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To: poindexter
Hilarious!

I once read a great Haiku review of The Blair Witch project. It went something like this:

Scream, scream, scream, scream, scream

Scream, scream, F- you, F- you, scream

Then the movie ends.

12 posted on 11/16/2001 1:15:22 PM PST by Hillary? Hell no!
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To: upchuck; poindexter
You guys got me laughing so hard I can hardly type. I can't decide which ones I like better, the Jewish Haiku or the Hillbilly Haiku.
13 posted on 11/16/2001 1:15:25 PM PST by Mr. Mulliner
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To: one_particular_harbour
Screeching banshee kids
Husband looking for dinner
Beer calling my name
14 posted on 11/16/2001 1:15:31 PM PST by riley1992
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To: one_particular_harbour
several of those had your name on them....
15 posted on 11/16/2001 1:15:32 PM PST by xsmommy
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To: upchuck
OMG! ROTFLMAO!!!

You're a gem upchuck!
wanna go drinkin' wit' yuh
laughin my @ss off..

16 posted on 11/16/2001 1:15:33 PM PST by g'nad
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To: one_particular_harbour
Possum on the spit
Monthly bath and trimming done
Date with my sister
18 posted on 11/16/2001 1:15:53 PM PST by riley1992
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To: upchuck
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
20 posted on 11/16/2001 1:17:17 PM PST by PeterBarringer
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