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To: cuban leaf

Did you read the article? It described everything, all the things that you were posting about on so many threads, you didn’t need the name to recognize it all.


42 posted on 03/12/2013 10:38:23 AM PDT by ansel12 ( August 29,2008 A Natural Born Reformer inadvertently unleashed within palace walls, change ensues.)
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To: ansel12

I skimmed the article, and then read it. The reason there are proofreaders is that people tend to make assumptions when writing that they are not even aware of. A proofreader will catch that. The article makes the assumption the reader already knows what he is talking about.

A professional writer would have, the first time he mentioned the guys name, said, “_______________, the ex-LA cop that killed four...”

If those simple words had been added I would have had all the context I needed. Right now all I’m hearing about is Cardinals. I want to be sure they pick the right pope and then kick the wildcats butts on April 16th. UL and UK are a big deal here in Kentucky. It’s even worse than UW and WSU in Washington. But for the life of me I don’t know why the cardinals get to choose a pope. It seems really unfair.


43 posted on 03/12/2013 11:25:46 AM PDT by cuban leaf (Were doomed! Details at eleven.)
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