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To: Mrs. Don-o

From a structural standpoint, I think it would be stronger if you went through the idea of waiting for a verdict, as opposed to an instant assessment of intentional killing, and after that, brought in the information about the reaction to Islamist killings.


3 posted on 08/18/2017 7:17:21 PM PDT by Tax-chick (You can't read all day if you don't start early in the morning.)
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To: Tax-chick
Right again! Right as rain.

I already sent this to CL, but I suppose I'll do a little copyediting before I put this in the hands of my pro-life, kinda CL-like, liberal pastor, the very fair-minded Fr. Pete.

Usually Don-o copyedits for me. This time I just churned it out and sent it, because I was indignant and much in a rush. €:√O

11 posted on 08/18/2017 7:46:26 PM PDT by Mrs. Don-o (Unless I am mistaken, I'm infallible.)
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