To: Rummyfan
Zimmerman’s effort to reimagine mangle the horrifying experience of a young woman and her family trying to avoid extermination is a cheap ploy to promote an onerous open borders agenda, while wrapping himself in the figurative pelts of Holocaust victims as protection against well-deserved condemnation.What a Frankenstein of a sentence. This writer is in need of an editor.
To: RoosterRedux
Might also be nice if in the first paragraph he told whether it was a play version, tv version or film version and what city it is in, right? Sheesh!
To: RoosterRedux
"This writer is in need of an editor."
Not as long as he has the "correct" social views....
4 posted on
08/05/2018 4:02:18 AM PDT by
Psalm 73
("I will now proceed to entangle the entire area".)
To: RoosterRedux
5 posted on
08/05/2018 4:23:46 AM PDT by
Rummyfan
(In any war between the civilized man and the savage, support the civilized man. Support Israel.)
To: RoosterRedux
Zimmerman’s effort to reimagine mangle the horrifying experience of a young woman and her family trying to avoid extermination is a cheap ploy to promote an onerous open borders agenda I figured it out after giving that source page a hit. There was a strike-through in the original copy.
10 posted on
08/05/2018 5:28:06 AM PDT by
FoxInSocks
("Hope is not a course of action." -- M. O'Neal, USMC)
To: RoosterRedux
I agree that the sentence still needs revision, however.
11 posted on
08/05/2018 5:29:01 AM PDT by
FoxInSocks
("Hope is not a course of action." -- M. O'Neal, USMC)
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