I’d like to see if he’s even capable of correcting his mistakes in his #3 post.
He needs to do a search for “run-on sentences”.
By the way, Nextrush, if you want to include links just post the complete URL in the comment box.
As long as no HTML is included it will automatically become a clickable link, with the exception of comment #1 where it doesn’t work that way.
In the article itself you may need to use HTML for links, but I’m not sure about that.