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To: TCH

Two minor changes that I think go better:

3rd verse, last line: “Now get down on your knees! … Be sure … I’ll inform you!”

And...

$th verse, last line: “I win through stealth … All of you… toe in line, see?”

That’s mo betta!

2 posted on 02/21/2010 2:50:40 PM PST by TCH (DON'T BE AN "O-HOLE"! ... DEMAND YOUR STATE ENACT ITS SOVEREIGNTY !)

To: TCH

Oooops...

4th verse, last line: I win through stealth... All of you... toe the line, see?

3 posted on 02/21/2010 2:52:25 PM PST by TCH (DON'T BE AN "O-HOLE"! ... DEMAND YOUR STATE ENACT ITS SOVEREIGNTY !)

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