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To: kristinn
In a speech with racist overtones given at the Hawaii Capitol Tuesday evening attended by Governor Neil Abercrombie (D), former Obama appointee Anthony K. "Van" Jones spoke at a rally to promote so-called economic justice and fairness by legislating a green energy State Partnership Bank about his being glad that (according to Jones) the'great white suburbs' of the American dream are 'dying.'

There's a sentence that would make any grammar school English teach proud. How about we mix in a period now and then, Mr. Writer?

5 posted on 03/21/2012 10:45:06 AM PDT by Tenacious 1 (With regards to the GOP: I am prodisestablishmentarianistic!)
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van jones is a little bitch....


8 posted on 03/21/2012 10:49:27 AM PDT by Maverick68
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To: Tenacious 1

There’s nothing grammatically wrong with that sentence, but it is certainly one hell of a prepositional phrase dump. I would try to diagram that sentence, but I don’t think there’s enough paper in my printer for it.


13 posted on 03/21/2012 10:55:33 AM PDT by rarestia (It's time to water the Tree of Liberty.)
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