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My first poem published in the Met Diary. This appeared in the Times' online edition on 1/21/15, and in the print edition on 1/26/2015.

Enjoy!

Paul (Silly)

(A note about excerpting: As the author of this work, I have received an official release from The New York Times to reprint this piece in its entirely: “You may reprint your story elsewhere after it appears in The Times.”)
1 posted on 02/01/2015 2:24:26 PM PST by Silly
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2 posted on 02/01/2015 2:27:42 PM PST by EternalVigilance (Jeb Bush should be running for president of Mexico.)
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To: Silly

That is a very beautiful poem!

Keep on writing them.

You are darn good!


3 posted on 02/01/2015 2:28:17 PM PST by miserare ("Reverence for life--life of all kinds--is the first principle of civilization." ~~Schweitzer)
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To: Silly

Bump


4 posted on 02/01/2015 2:28:48 PM PST by Jet Jaguar
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To: Silly

Congratulations! Great poem: seeing the extraordinary in the mundane.


5 posted on 02/01/2015 2:29:44 PM PST by demshateGod (The fool hath said in his heart, There is no God.)
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To: Silly

way to go


6 posted on 02/01/2015 2:30:40 PM PST by woofie
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To: Silly

bump and congrats!


8 posted on 02/01/2015 2:32:10 PM PST by Katya (Homo Nosce Te Ipsum)
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To: Silly

I enjoyed the poem, the lyrical phrasing coated with familiar imagery. Made me think of some work by Yates.


9 posted on 02/01/2015 2:36:04 PM PST by lee martell
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To: Silly

Nice!


10 posted on 02/01/2015 2:36:14 PM PST by Southside_Chicago_Republican (If liberty means anything at all, it means the right to tell people what they do not want to hear.)
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To: Silly

hurray!


12 posted on 02/01/2015 2:41:59 PM PST by Gefn (Forget the Super Bowl. The Big Bowl action is the Kitten Bowl.)
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To: Silly

As a geek who generally disdains poetry.......loved that poem.

Keep on truckin’!


14 posted on 02/01/2015 3:09:51 PM PST by Da Coyote
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To: Silly

That was charming, thank you for sharing it!


15 posted on 02/01/2015 3:15:17 PM PST by Tax-chick ("It's always a longer trip when you defy God." ~ Msgr. Charles Pope)
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To: Silly

I’ll send this to my friend who ran the homeschool association Hobbit Club. We studied the book for nine months before the first movie came out. Even my thick-headed #4 son got enough out of it to mumble, “Hey, that wasn’t in the book!”


17 posted on 02/01/2015 4:13:01 PM PST by Tax-chick ("It's always a longer trip when you defy God." ~ Msgr. Charles Pope)
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Hey Silly, congratulations! Love the poem - I’m sure I’ll find myself looking for that Reader next time I’m on the 1 train!

Nice to see you again on FR. Please add me to your ping list. And when’s the next Manhattan FReeper Happy Hour?


20 posted on 02/01/2015 10:15:26 PM PST by free-in-nyc (Freeping from the heart of the occupation)
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To: Silly

Nice poem! I like the image. Sounds like Samwise Gamgee reading it. (I know, wrong book! LOL!)


21 posted on 02/01/2015 10:24:09 PM PST by Hetty_Fauxvert (FUBO, and the useful idiots you rode in on!)
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To: Silly

Paul, that sounds a lot like our current president.... I can picture him doing just that on his way to a work site, just checking up on things, going incognito.

In any case, congrats!


24 posted on 07/15/2018 10:57:16 AM PDT by proud American in Canada
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To: Silly

You really paint a very vivid picture!

Well done!


26 posted on 05/25/2020 12:03:34 AM PDT by proud American in Canada (In these trying times, Give me Liberty or Give me Death!)
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