What’s the lesson or purpose of the story and did you achieve it? Who is the audience?
Liked it. Believable story.
Thank you, I’ll correct those errors.
The audience is 7 to 11 year old children.
Lesson and purpose? Hmm, good question.
I guess to know where you live and listen to mom about going home before it gets dark.
It’s a story to entertain, and it is based on a true event in my life, so i am glad it came off as believable.