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To: jazusamo
Whale watching boat carrying 27 sinks

It is sad, but despite the tragedy, that headline is written so badly that it attracts attention.

Whale, watching boat carrying 27, sinks
Whale, watching boat, carrying 27, sinks
Whale, watching boat carrying 27 sinks
Whale watching boat, carrying 27 sinks

Instead, how about:
Whale-watching boat sinks, carrying 27

13 posted on 10/25/2015 8:32:28 PM PDT by exDemMom (Current visual of the hole the US continues to dig itself into: http://www.usdebtclock.org/)
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To: exDemMom

I was wondering why they needed that many sinks. Alright, one for the galley, one, maybe two for the restrooms, but 27? No way!!


14 posted on 10/25/2015 9:13:30 PM PDT by Torahman (Remember the Maccabees!)
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