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To: doug from upland

Obviously the author is not a fan of short sentences.


3 posted on 05/06/2018 11:07:17 AM PDT by Attention Surplus Disorder (Apoplectic is where we want them.)
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To: Attention Surplus Disorder
Obviously the author is not a fan of short sentences."

Well, sometimes a long sentence is needed to fully express all the thoughts that you want to convey, and that are legitimately interconnected and that would therefore seem scattered if expressed independently, even if you are running the risk of the appearance of a 'flight of ideas' to the casual reader who hasn't taken the time to understand the manner in which all these thoughts fit together - or something.

5 posted on 05/06/2018 11:31:24 AM PDT by neverevergiveup
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To: Attention Surplus Disorder
"Obviously the author is not a fan of short sentences."

Yeah, I was looking at that, too, and wondering how would I ever diagram that. Ha!

7 posted on 05/06/2018 11:40:22 AM PDT by jackibutterfly (It' funny (NOT ha! ha!). We dehumanize humans and humanize animals.)
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To: Attention Surplus Disorder

Said the freeper named Attention Surplus Disorder


34 posted on 05/07/2018 7:05:33 AM PDT by Pollard (If you don't understand what I typed, you haven't read the classics.)
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