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To: YogicCowboy
Here's an example of what I feel is the limit for a sentence. I wrote it long then condensed it: "I am sent to upgrade your understanding, to enlist your cooperation in bringing a shift in human consciousness by ending individual reliance upon energy provisioned by a small oligarchy."

That sentence was eleven words longer until edited. Editing is the work part of writing, unless You write things like South Pacific.

30 posted on 05/06/2018 6:17:27 PM PDT by MHGinTN (A dispensational perspective is a powerful tool for discernment)
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To: MHGinTN
unless You write things like South Pacific.

In which case your last name is Michener.

Unless of course you're in a more musical mood. In that case you're either Rodgers or Hammerstein.. ;-)

31 posted on 05/06/2018 7:15:20 PM PDT by NoCmpromiz (John 14:6 is a non-pluralistic comment.)
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