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To: neverevergiveup

LOL ... when writing a novel, I have to constantly fight the ‘too long’ demon, becauseun-on sentences can magically switch to pettifoggery, too quickly, and too often, detracting from the story line and confusing the reader who is kind enough to read the darn things. [See?]


6 posted on 05/06/2018 11:36:46 AM PDT by MHGinTN (A dispensational perspective is a powerful tool for discernment)
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To: MHGinTN

I love it!


21 posted on 05/06/2018 1:33:43 PM PDT by neverevergiveup
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To: MHGinTN; neverevergiveup

I try to alternate: occasional lengthy but elegant sentences, frequent short and pithy ones.

Long sentences are an art form, if done smoothly. A literate reader can appreciate such.


28 posted on 05/06/2018 6:06:01 PM PDT by YogicCowboy ("I am not entirely on anyone's side, because no one is entirely on mine." - J. R. R. Tolkien)
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