[al baby]

“The study inquires about the respondents’ motivations to benefit him/herself, and the following social groups: the family, the Black community, the White community, God and church, The U.S. society, the non-White races of the world, and the human species as a whole.”
[sic] Michele Obama

Looks ok to me

[RoosterRedux]

Looks ok to me

Aha!

Busted.

You're a Princeton grad.

[alexander_busek]

“The study inquires about the respondents’ motivations to benefit him/herself themselves, and the following social groups: the family, the Black community, the White community, God and church, The U.S. society, the non-White races of the world, and the human species as a whole.”

Respondents' is in the possessive plural, hence the corresponding personal pronouns must likewise be in the plural.

That's just for starters. I'm sure that if I subjected myself to the rest of the text, I'd want to "off" myself by the conclusion.

Regards,