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To: ding_dong_daddy_from_dumas
My fault for not including that paragraph. I was trying to save space on FR storage devices.

So you're saying that your headline should have been expanded to read:

Dershowitz took exception to Mueller having said that they would have said so if they had had confidence that the president clearly did not commit a crime with this statement in his piece, “Dershowitz: Shame on Robert Mueller for exceeding his role.”

I think that your copy-editor might have come up with a clearer, more-concise, FR storage-device-saving headline, e.g.:

Dershowitz takes exception to Mueller's lying, weasely statement

That hits the nail on the head, doesn't it?

Regards,

56 posted on 05/29/2019 10:35:58 PM PDT by alexander_busek (Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.)
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To: alexander_busek
So you're saying that your headline should have been expanded...

No. My article excerpt should have included the Mueller statement to which Dersh was referring.

I think that your copy-editor might have come up with a clearer, more-concise, FR storage-device-saving headline, e.g.: Dershowitz takes exception to Mueller's lying, weasely statement

That might be better. But of course we as FR posters are supposed to use the original title if it fits. Although I have been known to add the interjection "Barf" to some articles.

57 posted on 05/29/2019 10:59:55 PM PDT by ding_dong_daddy_from_dumas (Mozart tells you what it's like to be human. Bach tells you what it's like to be the universe)
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