What you deliberately or incompetently leave out of an article is just as important as what you put in.
Is this comment aimed at yesthatjallen or is this my bad?
#18, I chose the blank #1 posting position to ask questions of the original author of the article, Moreno (who I know nothing about).
The “what you” reference was to any writer, myself included, about what is good, concise and honest writing.
NOT aimed at “yesthatjallen” and you are Not Bad, this time /sarc (But next time, “No Soup for You”!!!)