[beckett]

Thanks for pinging me to your paper. I trust you received a top grade, since the scholarship is excellent. I learned a lot.

[Pyro7480]

Thanks for the compliment. :-) As I said in my comments below the article, I am planning on rewriting it, using footnotes instead of in-text citations, and to make sure that there is no question of improperly paraphrasing the source material (even though the professor graded it and saw no problem - I want to cover my bases). Out of a total of 80 points possible for the paper, I received a 78. I got 2 points taken off for some minor errors I made in the original draft, but I fixed them in this post. The professor wrote "excellent paper, well-organized and deftly argued." Even with that, there's always room for improvement. ;-)