To: fightinJAG
I like suspense in other contexts such as mystery novels, but for journalism I prefer to see the “inverted pyramid” in which the essentials come first, with a strong topic sentence and a 1st paragraph the outlines the gist of the article.
14 posted on
12/03/2008 12:03:04 AM PST by
Enchante
(Countless Innocents in Mumbai, India Suffer the "Religion of Peace" in Action)
To: Enchante
Yep. Make the bottom line your top line when writing articles such as this.
30 posted on
12/03/2008 6:32:31 AM PST by
fightinJAG
(TWO BIG BUSH TAX CUTS EXPIRE AT THE END OF 2008. Happy New Year, love, President Obama)
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