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This is my first column as a paid writer for the Freeport Ink, our local alternative weekly. Forgive me for tooting my own horn, but I'm just really glad to be a real live professional media jackal! Plus, I wanted to share that joy with my favorite 100,000 people, Free Republic!

This ran over a month ago, but I had wanted to wait to post it until I had a new contract with the Ink. Since I only sell them first print rights, I am giving away first electronic rights by posting here. Hope you enjoy it, and feel free to offer constructive criticism if you wish. I'll post the next one (from later in June) tomorrow and the third (from mid-july) on Friday.

Also, please note that I am establishing a low-volume ping list for my column work. This will be pinged once or twice a month at first, but I will eventually be writing for them weekly. Sing out if you want on the list.

1 posted on 07/21/2004 6:09:08 PM PDT by Mr. Silverback
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Look Ma, I'm a media jackal!


2 posted on 07/21/2004 6:14:50 PM PDT by Mr. Silverback (Get in the fight today: Freepmail me to get on your state's KerryTrack Ping list!)
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Congratulations!


3 posted on 07/21/2004 6:21:58 PM PDT by 68-69TonkinGulfYachtClub (Just say NO to TV and Cable "News" , "Polls" and "Election Results")
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Very interesting and well-written. Sounds like you will be a great help to the local people there.

One grammar comment I'll add. (I hesitate to say this, because I make grammar mistakes myself! But you asked for any constructive criticism...)

"It could only make about 100 knots when loaded, and had an awful rate of climb."

There should not be a comma after the word "loaded."

Your article is great, so please only take this as encouragement!


5 posted on 07/21/2004 6:27:36 PM PDT by Cedar
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Woo hoo! Congrats to a published FReeper!!


7 posted on 07/21/2004 6:30:21 PM PDT by NotJustAnotherPrettyFace (Michael <a href = "http://www.michaelmoore.com/" title="Miserable Failure">"Miserable Failure"</a>)
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A congrats BTTT!


12 posted on 07/21/2004 6:50:09 PM PDT by facedown (Armed in the Heartland)
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Your specific example of Waldron is interesting and may be applicable, however we did win WW2 thru technological advances.

A better example might be the WBTS when the South could not afford to keep up with technological advances like the Spencers. That was costly.

Your article sounds a lot like Hanson's work.

13 posted on 07/21/2004 6:56:49 PM PDT by stainlessbanner (quis custodiet ipsos custodies)
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CONGRATS!


14 posted on 07/21/2004 6:57:06 PM PDT by dila813
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Great article.

This is not a criticism at all, but just my 2 cents...

Word is that the Mitsubishi Zero was a carbon copy of a plane Howard Hughes had offered the US armed forces before the war, and they turned it down.

Certainly, it was better than anything we had in December, 1941.


16 posted on 07/21/2004 7:53:07 PM PDT by dsc
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Congratulations!

I just hope your new career as a paid media whore doesn't take away from my beloved

Useful Idiot Caption-a-Rama!

I just love that!

17 posted on 07/21/2004 7:55:25 PM PDT by ILBBACH
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Congratulations! Never forget...

IT'S BUSH'S FAULT!


18 posted on 07/21/2004 8:03:29 PM PDT by Slings and Arrows (Am Yisrael Chai!)
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That is so exciting - and it's a great column! Put me on your permanent ping list!


19 posted on 07/21/2004 8:42:04 PM PDT by Rabid Dog (Join your FreeRepublic Chapter and make a difference!)
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Muchas Grats! I'm sure that the NYT will pick you up any day now. Yeah... any day now...

Kerry seemed to believe that all the complex problems of U.S.-Soviet relations would vanish with a “poof” if we would just build fewer ships and planes.

Funny how it turned out exactly the opposite. The Gipper built more military hardware... and all the complex problems of U.S.-Soviet relations vanished with a "poof".

20 posted on 07/21/2004 8:44:03 PM PDT by Starve The Beast (I used to be disgusted, but now I try to be amused)
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Sign me up, please.


21 posted on 07/21/2004 8:50:03 PM PDT by 185JHP ( "Ich kann nicht anders." d,v,c)
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Great article! I am very impressed.

Please put me on this ping list also. (Don't take me off the other one though!)


24 posted on 07/21/2004 11:20:18 PM PDT by texasflower (in the event of the rapture.......the Bush White House will be unmanned)
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Very very very good. The last two lines are zingers, and bear repeating, (so I will.)

Which really costs more, defense or tribute? If you doubt the answers, consider that we can’t ask Lt. Commander John Waldron. He and his men lie somewhere northwest of Midway Island, a grave they were brought to by their own valor and other men’s wishful thinking.

I had an opinion column published here about 6 weeks ago in our local paper (a NYT affiliate) on abortion. They published it, but beat the bushes for an alternative view. It was written, incidently, by a pro-choice, pro-gay marriage unitarian univeralist reverend. They published our opinions side by side.

At first, I was a little miffed, but then I decided I must have hit a nerve, otherwise an alternative view would not have been necessary.

Congratulations! I'm very impressed. You were paid! And even better, right about Kerry.

27 posted on 07/22/2004 3:02:16 AM PDT by Tuscaloosa Goldfinch
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Almost forgot. Please add me to your ping list.


28 posted on 07/22/2004 3:03:36 AM PDT by Tuscaloosa Goldfinch
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I enjoyed the read, please include me on your ping list.

YOU DONE GOOD MAYNARD

31 posted on 07/22/2004 5:04:08 AM PDT by Core_Conservative (Screw ‘moderates.’ Only things found in the middle of the road are yellow lines and road kill!)
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Thanks, Mr. S

Keep 'em coming.

32 posted on 07/22/2004 5:36:33 AM PDT by LTCJ (Gridlock '05 - the Lesser of Three Evils.)
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Good article. Remember us little folks when you are a big famous writer.


33 posted on 07/22/2004 6:08:37 AM PDT by jtminton (<--Click here for new pictures!)
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Congratulations, but this better not cut into the Caption-O-Rama.... :)


35 posted on 07/22/2004 8:10:46 AM PDT by Tijeras_Slim (Be a Dollar a Day FReeper, and SMILE when you get your Mastercard bill!)
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