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To: perry Ga

IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF

you would like readers

to consider your post . . . uhhhhhhhhh

coherent

and

worth pausing to read . . .

You might TRY VERY VERY VERY HARD

to . . .

1. put it in paragraphs 4-8 lines long.

2. string together as many related rational thoughts, phrases, sentences as may be possible given the synapses at work . . .

3. leave the reader with some sort of rational impression that the reader MIGHT, at least MIGHT, have some coherent rational response to . . . i.e. beyond jaw dropping guffaws.

4. Of course IF this is just some exercise in recreational out-of-body—out-of-mind

quasi-pseudo-spiritual

mumbojumbo . . . then you seem to have ended up in the wrong place. You might try KOS.


27 posted on 07/12/2009 9:18:57 PM PDT by Quix (POL Ldrs quotes fm1900 2 presnt: http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/religion/2130557/posts?page=81#81)
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To: Quix

And...

5. don’t try to post in prose.


36 posted on 07/12/2009 9:22:21 PM PDT by mamelukesabre (Si Vis Pacem Para Bellum (If you want peace prepare for war))
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To: Quix

Is it time to take up a collection and get a Strunk&White for this poor hack?


46 posted on 07/12/2009 9:25:51 PM PDT by MHGinTN (Believing they cannot be deceived, they cannot be convinced when they are deceived.)
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