IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF
you would like readers
to consider your post . . . uhhhhhhhhh
coherent
and
worth pausing to read . . .
You might TRY VERY VERY VERY HARD
to . . .
1. put it in paragraphs 4-8 lines long.
2. string together as many related rational thoughts, phrases, sentences as may be possible given the synapses at work . . .
3. leave the reader with some sort of rational impression that the reader MIGHT, at least MIGHT, have some coherent rational response to . . . i.e. beyond jaw dropping guffaws.
4. Of course IF this is just some exercise in recreational out-of-body—out-of-mind
quasi-pseudo-spiritual
mumbojumbo . . . then you seem to have ended up in the wrong place. You might try KOS.
And...
5. don’t try to post in prose.
Is it time to take up a collection and get a Strunk&White for this poor hack?