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Air and Thought
January 31st, 2002 | Sabertooth

Posted on 01/31/2002 5:34:04 AM PST by Sabertooth

Air and Thought

All day I dreamed I'd rather be someplace
The air is still and quiet. Some tranquil scene,
Some peaceful seat, where I might savor grace--
How likely that my heart would be serene?

I'd know her laughing footfalls coming there
And I would feel her shadow's cool caress,
Then I would smell the darkness of her hair.
Ahh… Now I hear the rustle of her dress…

She sits, and with each breath, each word, I take
In from her lips, I share her air and thought.
My eyes sip sunlight splashing her, and slake,
For now, a thirst in me… unquenched… unsought.

Intentions blush; our timid joys are met.
Though I am touched, shall I touch her? Not yet.



TOPICS: Culture/Society; Miscellaneous
KEYWORDS: freeople; hughhewitt
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To: Sabertooth
One poem deserves another...

So beautiful when she sleeps
Her hair cascades on the pillow
Like a soft silken meadow
My fingers can run barefoot through

So beautiful when she sleeps
Her curves caressed by the covers
As if they were jealous lovers
She sometimes takes my breath away

Just a little song I've been working on...
21 posted on 01/31/2002 6:12:35 AM PST by GodBlessRonaldReagan
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To: Sabertooth
I had a request for a poem this morning...
Everyone suffers...

Not I. Thanks for the sonnet.

22 posted on 01/31/2002 6:14:54 AM PST by bwteim
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To: Sabertooth;Alamo-Girl;BeforeISleep;simcha7;2ndMostConservativeBrdMember;palo verde;BADJOE...
To be 'touched by Grace' and yet not able return that touch, except in the touching of others, is the essence of 'the Spirit'. Wonderfully done, o poet laureate of FR.
23 posted on 01/31/2002 6:16:45 AM PST by d14truth
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To: Sabertooth
Beautiful...
24 posted on 01/31/2002 6:18:47 AM PST by g'nad
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To: bwteim
Thanks for the sonnet.
Thanks for the request.


25 posted on 01/31/2002 6:38:48 AM PST by Sabertooth
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To: MeeknMing
Thought you'd appreciate some balance...


26 posted on 01/31/2002 6:51:42 AM PST by Sabertooth
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To: Sabertooth
This is what, the second or third this month? Did you meet someone over the Holidays?
Seriously, these are very good...
27 posted on 01/31/2002 6:54:26 AM PST by HiJinx
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To: Sabertooth
If you show her this poem, you may not have to touch her...she'll touch you.
28 posted on 01/31/2002 6:56:49 AM PST by Aquamarine
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To: BOBTHENAILER
LOL!
29 posted on 01/31/2002 6:59:32 AM PST by MeekOneGOP
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To: Sabertooth
>I had a request for a poem this morning... Everyone suffers...

Mother, Mother, tell me true
Why the moo cow go moo-moo
And the she goat go naa-naa
What is that?
The heck you say!

Father, Father, Mother lied
When she said that you had died
Here you stand now at my bed
You could do that
If you were dead!

Mark W.

(I know where that's from... Anybody else?)

30 posted on 01/31/2002 7:04:15 AM PST by MarkWar
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To: Sabertooth
Thought you'd appreciate some balance...
Yeah! Thanks. . .



31 posted on 01/31/2002 7:10:38 AM PST by MeekOneGOP
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To: Sabertooth
Wow! I love your poems, Saber. You're really good!
32 posted on 01/31/2002 7:12:07 AM PST by Victoria Delsoul
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To: Sabertooth
Everyone suffers?

Actually, everyone gains.

Nice job, filled with images.

33 posted on 01/31/2002 7:39:55 AM PST by BOBTHENAILER
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To: Sabertooth
Thanks for the ping Saber...this is your best one yet!
34 posted on 01/31/2002 7:58:05 AM PST by NCEaglette
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To: BOBTHENAILER
Nice job, filled with images.

Thanks, Bob. That Tuesday Weld is something, huh?


35 posted on 01/31/2002 8:00:53 AM PST by Sabertooth
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To: MeeknMing
All day I dreamed I'd rather be someplace
The air is still and quiet. Some tranquil scene,
Some peaceful seat, where I might savor grace--
How likely that my heart would be serene?


36 posted on 01/31/2002 8:08:11 AM PST by SusanUSA
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To: Sabertooth
Sounds like a Maui encounter.

In the soft Maui night
her hot breath did linger
not feeling the ring
slip from my finger.

37 posted on 01/31/2002 8:28:07 AM PST by fish hawk
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To: Sabertooth
bttt
38 posted on 01/31/2002 8:53:34 AM PST by vikingchick
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To: fish hawk;CheneyChick
Nice, fish hawk. Air fares are dropping!
CC, check out thread when you get a chance.
39 posted on 01/31/2002 8:56:55 AM PST by bwteim
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To: SusanUSA
True, she has the wrong hair color, but you're supposed to be looking at the scenery. :-)
What scenery?
:o)
Beautiful post. Thanks!
40 posted on 01/31/2002 9:15:29 AM PST by MeekOneGOP
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