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My Son Wrote This...Hope for the Future...
My Son Wrote This! | 11/19/2016 | My Son

Posted on 11/19/2016 8:32:01 AM PST by CogitoPatriot

As the false song of globalism continues to play, the audience grows wary.

The instruments, out of tune. The notes, flat.

Played with such lackluster, how ever will they capture the hearts of man?

"Alas! The Crescendo!" the Composer discerns, waving his arms.

It's louder now, faster... He fears it his last attempt.

But what of the sound? He waves the percussion down, "too much," he screams in his head.

Though it gets louder.

"You fools!" he screams, still waving his arms-frantically now, with no touch, "You'll ruin it all!"

But he sees now, that indeed, his snare, his bass, sit motionless.

It grows louder now.

He turns.

The audience has awakened. Their eyes filled with tears, but not tears of sadness- no, its something else...

Their shoulders.... chests, broad, stern..

They've heard this sound before. They remember it. Why has it been so long?

It grows louder.

"I've done it!" the Composer exclaims, but no sound he makes can compete with the roaring ensemble that approaches.

The marching, advancing drum lines...

Of Patriots.


TOPICS: Miscellaneous; Society
KEYWORDS: antiglobalism; patrioticpoem
As the false song of globalism continues to play, the audience grows wary.

The instruments, out of tune. The notes, flat.

Played with such lackluster, how ever will they capture the hearts of man?

"Alas! The Crescendo!" the Composer discerns, waving his arms.

It's louder now, faster... He fears it his last attempt.

But what of the sound? He waves the percussion down, "too much," he screams in his head.

Though it gets louder.

"You fools!" he screams, still waving his arms-frantically now, with no touch, "You'll ruin it all!"

But he sees now, that indeed, his snare, his bass, sit motionless.

It grows louder now.

He turns.

The audience has awakened. Their eyes filled with tears, but not tears of sadness- no, its something else...

Their shoulders.... chests, broad, stern..

They've heard this sound before. They remember it. Why has it been so long?

It grows louder.

"I've done it!" the Composer exclaims, but no sound he makes can compete with the roaring ensemble that approaches.

The marching, advancing drum lines...

Of Patriots.

1 posted on 11/19/2016 8:32:01 AM PST by CogitoPatriot
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To: CogitoPatriot

Beautiful poem. Powerful message.


2 posted on 11/19/2016 8:41:10 AM PST by stars & stripes forever (Blessed is the nation whose God is the Lord. Psalm 33:12)
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To: CogitoPatriot

My I borrow it and share it with my FB patriots?


3 posted on 11/19/2016 8:50:23 AM PST by heylady
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To: heylady

This poem is Shostakovich’s Fifth writ large.


4 posted on 11/19/2016 9:01:04 AM PST by bioqubit (bioqubit: Educated Men Make Terrible Slaves - Aristotle)
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To: CogitoPatriot

Bravo!


5 posted on 11/19/2016 9:14:48 AM PST by georgiegirl (Count me in the half that's in the Deplorable Basket)
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To: CogitoPatriot

Talented son. That was beautiful. Thanks for sharing.


6 posted on 11/19/2016 9:18:26 AM PST by FES0844 (Gv)
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To: CogitoPatriot

Copyright it.


7 posted on 11/19/2016 9:28:52 AM PST by amihow
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To: amihow; CogitoPatriot
Copyright it.

Yes. Fill out the form and send it to the Library of Congress and get that Cosmic 'C' on it immediately.

Simply placing the © symbol on it makes it copyrighted. Filing the form makes it official.

8 posted on 11/19/2016 9:36:13 AM PST by Bloody Sam Roberts (Don't question faith. Don't answer lies.)
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To: CogitoPatriot

Very good indeed.


9 posted on 11/19/2016 10:05:28 AM PST by Robert DeLong
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To: CogitoPatriot

cool!

I could feel it as I read it :)

“Well Done!” to you son and thank you for sharing it


10 posted on 11/19/2016 11:17:35 AM PST by b4me (If Jesus came to set us free, why are so many professed Believers still in chains?)
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To: CogitoPatriot
I like it. How about opting to

Donate to FR

and sticking round for something other than a vanity?

11 posted on 11/19/2016 11:27:48 AM PST by trebb (Where in the the hell has my country gone?)
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