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To: Enchante

I sort of got the idea the writer was attempting to build suspense-—would it or would it not cause breast cancer?

Must have been a slow day at Science Daily. lol


10 posted on 12/02/2008 11:57:33 PM PST by fightinJAG (TWO BIG BUSH TAX CUTS EXPIRE AT THE END OF 2008. Happy New Year, love, President Obama)
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To: fightinJAG

I like suspense in other contexts such as mystery novels, but for journalism I prefer to see the “inverted pyramid” in which the essentials come first, with a strong topic sentence and a 1st paragraph the outlines the gist of the article.


14 posted on 12/03/2008 12:03:04 AM PST by Enchante (Countless Innocents in Mumbai, India Suffer the "Religion of Peace" in Action)
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